This week I got feedback from my mentor on my first blocking pass. His main feedback was to reduce sideways movement in first two steps, some correction on balance in some of the poses where it fees that character is going to fall down or character is in awkward position. He also gave feedback on silhouette of some of the poses where shapes are not clear.
I tried my best to do all of these corrections & sent my second blocking pass...
Blocking pass : 02